[Arael]

Hi everyone
I would like start a new idea with you all.
I would like write with you a storie, maybe for Jeremy .
In the time, I seen a many fans write stories. So I think we get a very cool storie.
It is easy. Today I write the first sentence without the last word.
The next of you write the last word and maybe the next sentence.
Write a one word or the next sentences. Please not more as three sentences .I hope you are about to write a storie.
Here my first sentence:

It was a very dark and cold in...


I don't know, it will be a thriller, a phantasie storie or an adventure in the future.
I hope of your creativity.
Have fun

Arael

[Nick13]

...That abandoned church.The lunar eclipse was almost complete and...


Just love this idea.Come on everyone!!!

[Arael]

...an owl cried in the night. The forest around the church...

Thank you very much Nick.

I love this writing.

[shiloxo]

follow the direction of the wind, then all the sudden.......

[Nick13]

[The forest follow the direction of the wind?I don't understand but],...one of the homeless twin brothers who were sleeping in the church's bench, woke scared...

shiloxo, on 16 June 2011 - 01:22 PM, said:

follow the direction of the wind, then all the sudden.......

[Arael]

thank you both.
I have made a little correction.

The forest around the church... bent in the wind. Then was sudden calm.

I hope this is right.

One of the homeless twin brothers who were sleeping in the church's bench, woke scared... by the noise on the organ. Who was playing a song? Jonas gone to the stairs. Justin, the other twin,....


I hope I see your both again
Thank your very much

[Nick13]

...snored sleepy.Jonas was hungry,and search in his pocket for the last pomegranate that was given by a town citizen...

[Soulsurferlover13]

to him the last time he had been in town.That had been when...

[Nick13]

...the circus people were in there.The sound of the organ was just a crow, pecking at the keys searching...

[Arael]

...to eat. But it seems, they both was here not alone in the church. Of cours it was here the crow, owls and...

[Soulsurferlover13]

The old orphaned dog called their home,and any other...

[Arael]

Hi soulsurferlover13

I don't know, what you are mean with...

The old orphaned dog called their home,and any other...

my sence was.....Of cours it was here the crow, owls and ....

maybe you mean:...and a dog. Her name is....

Can you help me the lines finish?

Thank you

[Soulsurferlover13]

@Arael well I meant it like the dog,crow,and owl called the church their home. But we can do it the other way thats fine too

[Arael]

Thank you soulsurferlover13.
I'll continue writing.

The dog sniff on Jonas pants. Jonas was still eating on her pomegranate. He liked it not. He dreamed of a great....

[Nick13]

...banquet, where he and his brother could devour all that is most tasty,without...

[Arael]

... fear. He was buried in her dream, as his brother Justin said:"....

[Nick13]

..."can I eat a piece of pomegranate?"-he asked while playing with the dog's ears,Jonas simply smiled...


Oh,it's really a pity no one else come to leave their part of story.

[Arael]

and showed him the rest of the pomegranate. Justin was hungry. As he pondered this, he heard a horse trotting in front of the church about it. Suddenly ...

I think too, it is very pity, we write alone.
A many members had wrote, they write stories,but I think this is not real so ot they have not interresting.
But I'm glad when do you write more.
I is a Brazil- German production....LOL
Thank you my friend

[Nick13]

...all was in dark.The eclipse was complete and the horse trotting seemed closer...


A Brazil/German production?I like how that sounds!

[Arael]

and the horses trotting ended. It was now not only dark, but also
unbearable still.Jonas had reached the organ and listened. It ...

Yes it is great Brazil and Germany write a storie. I hope we get a exciting storie.